Called Home, by paul m. (Winchester, Va.: Red Moon Press, 2006). 92
unnumbered pages; 4 ¼" x 6 ½"; paperback, perfectbound. $12.00 from
the publisher at PO Box 2461, Winchester VA 22604.
This second book of haiku by Paul Miller, writing under his haigo paul
m., continues —and perhaps completes—the quest he began in his
earlier Finding the Way (Press Here, 2002). The quest is for a sense of home,
of "rootedness." In the Introduction, Miller informs the reader that although
he spent most of his life in California, he has now returned to live
in New England, the land of his ancestors, a fact that is clearly of great
significance to the poet. The haiku in Called Home are arrayed roughly as a
trip of discovery and rediscovery, from west to east.
Even apart from any personal meaning his trip may have had for the
poet and the cohesiveness of the book concept, this is an important book
of haiku. Miller has been writing haiku for nearly twenty years, and almost
from the beginning his has been a strong voice in the development of an
American model of haiku. His work continues to be at the cutting edge.
A comparison of paul m.’s verses with a more or less standard definition
of English-language haiku points up telling differences. In terms of form
his haiku are always in three lines but never—or only accidentally — in a
5–7–5–syllable pattern. He tends more toward using a 2–3–2 beat structure,
but even this never tyrannizes his haiku. His haiku are about nature,
broadly defined, but the nub of each poem is human nature — a distinguishing
plus in our view. Miller’s haiku are very lyrical and are usually seasonal,
but in a casual way. Traditional haikai use of kigo to evoke a specific
seasonal "essence" (as the Japanese do) is absent, as for example in haiku
that contain two seasonal markers,
late spring walk
flattened grass
where the ewe was sheared |
moving the cow
closer to baby Jesus
yesterday’s snow |
The "haiku moment" is very strongly present in Miller’s work, and the
key to his technique is adroit selection of two images to bracket that moment.
This is an essential element of a good haiku, in our opinion, and
Miller’s work is exemplary in this aspect. Miller’s images are not always
concrete; he often uses mental constructs, negative ideas, philosophical
statements, or speculation as one of his images, as in these haiku:
orderly fields
of an Amish farm
the things I can’t tell her |
expanding universe
a vine as thick as my arm
cut at the root |
The degree of separation of the images in his haiku is the key to Miller’s
great art —and also, very occasionally, his shortcoming. This crucial aspect
of the haiku—placement of two images in a way that requires the interpolation
of the reader—has been compared to the action of a spark plug:
if the points are too close, a short circuit will result (i.e., if the images of
a haiku are too close to one another, there is no surprise and the reader
responds, "so what") but if the points are too far apart, there will be no
spark at all (i.e., the reader’s mind cannot bridge the two images and responds,
"huh?"). Miller sets the gap at the maximum. There is a great deal
of subjectivity in all this, of course: for example, the poet can write a very
personal or Aesopian haiku (one suspects Miller is doing this on occasion)
that makes perfect sense to him/her but will fall flat with a reader not in the
know. The images in these haiku seem fathomable to me:
last warm days
the discarded skin
of a praying mantis |
gone to bed angry
the din
of summer insects |
these really push it:
chance of showers
a frayed rope
linking the mules |
drifting seed fluff …
the rented horse
knows an hour’s worth |
and these have images too distant or are too amorphous for me to find
much meaning:
migratory ducks
I have never
kept a diary |
lizard sunning itself
this side
of the waterfall |
Miller and Red Moon Press have published a masterful book in all respects.
Everyone interested in how the envelope of American haiku is expanding
needs to read this book carefully—a most pleasurable pursuit.